
Rating: 3 š
Security Detail is one of Tortugaās Cozy Romances and a side story to her last book, Trial By Fire.
That was a romance between a Texas rodeo cowboy and an Australian one, both from rich families with a stake in a child left a orphan when the parents, siblings of the main characters, died.
This book involves two men from the security team from the now married couple, who divide their time between the two countries and their two large holdings. Again oneās a Texan and oneās an Aussie.
The romance isnāt bad, in fact itās sweet and hot. However, thereās other issues here that carry over from that first novel.
If youāre writing about characters from another country, especially one like Australian, then those characters need to behave and sound like they come from Australia. Even the certain part of Australia.
However, here thereās absolutely nothing to distinguish Ryan (Texan) from Dez (Aussie). Not Dezās dialog, nothing in his casual chatter, or even the way a Aussie shortens certain words. Thereās pages and pages, then a āOiā gets thrown in the beginning of a sentence. And thatās it .
From a author whoās unbelievable talent lies in establishing the very heart and soul of a character as well as the culture of the land they walk on by just a regional throw away line, the lack of any color to the people here via the verbiage is disappointing.
Nothing especially says Texas either.
Could be anywhere West.
Then thereās the drama which is just , if Iām being kind, uncomplicated. Itās almost exactly the same as before. These are supposed to be extremely smart security professionals. Nothing here says that. So itās very hard for a reader to engage in the storylines and main characters. Plus thereās no real resolution to the mystery behind the kidnapping. Thatās left forgotten, and the reader unsatisfied with this aspect of the story. At least this reader.
Still, people like the intriguing Chrissie the tech guy make the book. You want more of him. And his background.
The conclusion is just odd. They basically decide to start a side office in Costa Rica because Ryan likes a beach and they needed a vacation. While thatās understandable, given past events, they hit their bosses and best friends with this out of the blue with no notice and with everything new , such as untried security just starting.
So again, no. A big SMH for this ending and really the entire story.
I like the cover .
To understand this book, you might want to read Trial By Fire beforehand.
https://www.goodreads.com āŗ showSecurity Detail (AusTex, #2) by B.A. Tortuga – Goodreads
Synopsis:
Security experts Dez and Ryan teamed up to form a business after they worked together on the kidnapping of a friend’s daughter. Australian Dez and former Marine Ryan have amazing chemistry together, and for one amazing night they acted on it. But then Des got cold feet, and the two of them have never connected again in that way.
Ryan thinks Dez just isn’t that into him. Dez doesn’t want to mess up his friendship with Ryan over something that may or may not ever come to pass. In the midst of all this frustration, they also have to deal with a security crisis with their respective best friends, Holden and Lachlan. When they have to band together to get their friends back, Ryan and Dez are reminded why they work so well together. But can they solve their own problems, and find their way back to each other, as well as save the day?









