A MelanieM Review: Dance Off by Dance Off by Ariel Tachna and Nessa L. Warin

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Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

Dance Off coverOn the reality show Dance Off, pro rugby player Olivier Gautier and Olympic swimmer JC Webster each have one goal in mind: to stay on the show as long as possible to earn his charity of choice maximum exposure and a larger donation. As the competition heats up, their goals expand to catching each other’s interest, but Olivier is firmly in the closet and plans to stay there. JC is willing to be discreet, but not to hide forever.

Starting a romance with another man is challenge enough for any celebrity, but doing it under the microscope of reality TV—and one majorly intolerant costar—is even harder. Add in meddling dance pros, JC’s overbearing family, and the need to play up chemistry with dance partners to win America’s hearts, and JC and Olivier’s time together is looking more and more like a recipe for disaster.

As the pressure to stay in the competition mounts, JC and Olivier must face their inevitable separation at the end of the show as well as decide whether a relationship as complicated as theirs can survive in the real world, outside the bubble of the set and practice studios.

Dance Off by Ariel Tachna and  Nessa L. Warin is an absolutely sweet love story that, for me at least,  gets bogged down by one of the plots points that probably pulled readers in…a reality show dance competition ala Dancing With The Stars.  Ariel Tachna has always had the ability to bring forth believable and mostly lovable characters in her stories.  The same can be said for Nessa L. Warin.  All of their characters have layers to their personalities, including quirks you either understand and love or frustrate the heck out of you.  All of that can be found here.

I thought the tv dance competition plot was a great element to wrap a romance around.  But here’s the thing.  I only moderately enjoy watching it on tv (mostly for people like Jerry Springer dancing their hearts out and like surprises along the way).   So for me, there was too much dance background going on here.  A few dance partners ok, here all the of the couples are well represented here.  Their characters are well defined and their actions believable but I thought after a while they took up too much of the “stage”, and it took away from the main characters and the evolving romance.  I would rather have had more of JC’s Abuela and endearing family, than a host of dancing couples.  When JC’s family merrily intruded, to great effect, upon JC and Olivier relationship and the dancing competition, the story leapt back to life after flagging somewhat under the details of the competition.  I adored that family and could have happily spent a lot more time with them instead of the dancers.

No, I came for the romance that I knew Ariel Tachna and Nessa L. Warin would create between Olivier and JC. And that didn’t disappoint.  I loved these characters and rooted for them the whole way through the story and dance off.   The authors made their men real, with their doubts, flaws, and passions.  I could see so easily their attraction to each other as well as the obstacles that arose around them.

If you are looking for a sweet romance and love reality shows along the line of  Dancing With The Stars, this story is for you.  I enjoyed my time with the main characters, even if the dancing competition got a little overwhelming for me.  Pick it up and decide for yourself.  It’s Spring and love is in the air, even on the dance floor!

Cover art by Bree Archer. The artist did a good job depicting the characters.  It’s charming and pulls you right in.

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Book Details:

ebook, 230 pages
Published March 20th 2015 by Dreamspinner Press
ISBN139781632168962
edition languageEnglish