A Jeri Review Retro Review Tour : Out Of Focus by L .A. Witt


Rating: 3 stars out of 5

I enjoy a good menage/throuple/MMM story. And while this one was good, it wasn’t great.

Two Doms in a long term relationship bring in a third on occasion to satisfy their various needs. And when Ryan and Dante are both immediately drawn to Jordan, they decide to feel him out for a reaction. And they get the reaction that they want.
It feels like this could have been book 2 in a series. I wanted to see more of Ryan and Dante navigating their way through a complicated relationship while also bringing in a third when they needed and wanted. Doing that in this book would have made it ridiculously long. But I want their story- the one before Jordan came into the picture.
And I just didn’t feel the emotion from these guys. I always felt like one of them was on the outside looking in. Both in the sex scenes and the romance. There were a few scenes with either just Jordan and Dante or just Jordan and Ryan. And while that wasn’t against their rules they set up, it didn’t seem genuine. I wanted all three guys together all of them time.
The BDSM element was just ok for me. It really seemed to mostly be orgasm denial/ edging. The two Doms both had different needs and wants. That is a lot for one sub to take.
So…it was good. Definitely not great. The lack of emotion being the biggest issue for me.
Sales Link: Universal Buy Link
Book Details:
Kindle Edition, 2nd edition, 366 pages
Published March 14th 2017 (first published August 2nd 2011)
Edition LanguageEnglish
CharactersRyan “Angel” Morgan, Dante James, Jordan Steele

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