
Rating: 3.25š
This is such a peculiar series. On one side, Kaye has created a terrific character in Keir Dearly, proprietor of Dearly & Son Funeral Home. Keir, one in a long line of Dearly men who can see and converse with the dead. That aspect of his life is due to an ancient curse on their family. Which is odd considering that it is really defined as a gift or a mediumās purpose not a curse outside of this world building.
But that perspective is reflective of the choices the author makes within this series.
But back to Keir. Heās intelligent, compassionate, an introvert whoās accepting of others and has a giving nature. In short, a fantastic person and character. And a perfect person to run a funeral home where the ghosts of the bodies delivered get a reception they deserve. Sometimes itās funny, sometimes itās grim, oftentimes itās poignant, even heart wrenching. We get the ghosts memories of their last moments and then their families, if they have them, grieving at their services. All conducted by Keir.
Thatās truly the best part of this book and series. Itās where the author goes spectacularly right. Itās in the smallest of details as Keir listens to the families or the ghosts pour out their hearts and emotions over the fact theyāre dead, how they died, and then seeing them pass on.
Itās not even the ghosts that are the main aspect of each storyline but ones that factor in as part of the daily life of Dearly & Son Funeral Home that can make you feel the most emotions. The woman who denied her sexuality and the woman who loved her until it was too late. That bittersweet funeral was shattering. Or the young man in the wrong place at the wrong time who died by GSW and was met by the ghost of his father. Buckets of tears I tell you for such a small scene .
But itās the other elements that make me question the world building, the storytelling and the series.
Unfortunately, it also includes the other main character and love interest.
Thatās Dashiell Clegg, younger owner/mechanic of a cycle shop. First met when his nasty ghost brother wanted Keir to save Dash from the plot he set him up when he was alive. Yeah, it didnāt make much sense in the first book either.
Dash is a problematic character. Part of the two person narrative, his voice is a grating one. I never understood how writers could create such a self centered character and expect the reader to get on board with him as part of a romance. Here Dash has fled to another country rather than talk to Keir about his āgift/curse/fearsā revelation. He also hasnāt communicated to his found family of coworkers in his shop whoāve always supported him, even in prison.
His thoughts and views are all about him. When eventually something happens to bring it to his attention that heās causing Keir and others pain? Itās yes āIām a jerk, Iām thoughtless ā but the author doesnāt create any real sense of realness or believability behind these thoughts.
Itās more a surface readymade answer you throw out rather than a real sense of introspection. In fact, thereās no sense of chemistry between Keir and Dash as characters. It seems like a forced element from the very beginning.
Aside from the lack of real relationships, thereās a new end of world story threads that again has little foundation but some interesting things about it. New characters appear, some very likable. And narratively, twists happen within the storyline that were predictable from the minute the clues begin to emerge. You knew which things or aspects of the plot were going to be the ābad ones ā.
The author was telegraphing it with a red and black stamp. Ditto the good ones.
I can can definitely say that Iām reading these books with very mixed feelings. Iām appreciative of quite a bit of the authorās work here but just not connecting with some major elements too. Half and half.
Itās also fifty fifty as to if Iām going to continue to read on with the series. If I do, it will be for all the terrific moments and for the character of Keir thatās a true draw for me.
Dearly and Departed series:
ā Dearly & Deviant Daniel #1
ā Dearly & Vain Valentino #2
⦠Dearly & Notorious Nancy #3
⦠Dearly & Homeless Horace #4-Jan 16,2024
⦠Dearly & Threatening Thane #5-June 28, 2024
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Dearly & Vain Valentino (Dearly and The Departed Book 2)
Blurb:
When the family business is death, how does one convince the deceased to embrace the afterlife without hurting their delicate feelings?
Keir Dearly, proprietor of Dearly & Son Funeral Home, is working his way through heartache after Dashiell Clegg, the object of his affection, has taken off on an adventure and left Keir behind. When a certain handsome detective shows up and wants to woo the mortician, temptation knocks. Will Keir answer while Dash is off trying to accept mind blowing news and navigate a new reality?
Valentino Rankin, a fledgling male model, becomes a client of Keirās at Dearly & Son by paying more attention to his reflection in a store window than the flow of traffic. He refuses to give Keir information to assist with reconnecting him to his body and has a hard time accepting he has to fight a living biker and a cop for Keir Dearlyās affections.
How can Keir convince Valentino that the afterlife is calling, or is there something more to Valentino that Keir canāt see? Can Dash help clear things up with his newly acquiredskills that will be a surprise to everyone? Thereās trouble with the electricity at Dearly & Son, and itās nothing an electrician can fix!








