
Rating: 4🌈
This type of book is extremely hard to read at times, and , for the same reasons, very difficult to rate. I wish I didn’t have to write that because I love how this series began.
K Sterling is a fascinating, imaginative writer, and I put several of Sterling’s works among my favorites. But that same inquisitive, brilliant mind that brings forth moving, modern, emotional narratives of nannies amidst Manhattan high rises can also get so caught up in creating a densely told labyrinthine fantasy tale.
One that starts with the following involved, detailed explanations from the author on
1.About Magickal Appropriation (BCE 2nd century Gaul, Ireland, Britain Druidic rituals etc)
2. Content Warnings And An Apology
3. Pronunciation & Translation Guide (very good and extremely long and will be repeated throughout the book with footnotes)
This is a clue on how the author intends to proceed with the book and address the issues of the religious aspects of the creation/combination of the storytelling and mythology found within.
Sterling is being both extremely precise with the foundations of this trilogy and themes of ancient gods awakening , then adding in the various mysteries and investigations as well as a huge sexual magic aspect to make a whole.
But instead these elements supporting or harmoniously combining together with other magical components, it gets weighed down by the author’s interpretation and references. All the numerous examples of footnotes, and descriptions which halt the story and take the reader from the narrative.
Example :
“Followers of the Badb or the Morrígan offer sacrifices to the warrior goddess because the lore holds that on the eve of the Battle of the Plain of Pillars—Samhain Eve—she met with and married the Dagda and the two mated. After, she advised him to gather his greatest warriors and that she would wield chaos and destruction when it was time to face the Fomorians [5] in battle the next day. On Samhain, they faced the enemy for the soul of Ireland and it was her ruthlessness that drove the Fomorians into defeat.”
The complex layers of additional properties of multiple mythologies (although primarily Celtic) , witchcraft, coming to life with foreboding consequences for the Earth and humanity, that the density overloads the characters and storylines right up to the 75% of the book. Then the actual plot and action is started back up again. It’s wrapped up quickly by Sterling as the author wants to get to the main drama, the god stuff that’s been playing out all along.
That’s a shame because the human drama. All those dead, tortured murdered girls, the cult and mystery behind them, that was , for me, the fascinating part of the story .That’s the real thing here. That investigation, the whole side themes and characters.
But the god awakening, all the research and mythology involved, and that thread was the one that Sterling was invested in and that’s what ended up being the one that led the narrative show.
So how to rate a book that the author put so much heart, so much research, time, so much effort into creating and crafting a story that, for me, ended up feeling like I was reading bits and pieces of a thesis or research for a project?
I found parts of this really interesting. I enjoyed reading the footnotes, albeit in stages. And I was entertained by the wrap up of the original storyline of the girls and that cult.
Everything else was just so dense and overly complex that I ended up removed from any connection I’d made previously to the main characters and their circle of friends.
That’s a shame because that first book presents a duo unlike anyone I’d met before.
I’m making no recommendations. If you like references, the author, mythology, check it out.
There’s a fourth book coming out.
Nelson & MacIlwraith: Moon Murder Mysteries I – III by K. Sterling, complete
Next up:
Nelson & MacIlwraith: The Curious Case of the Cadwallader
Buy link:
Nelson & MacIlwraith: Moon Murder Mysteries III
Blurb:
The Moon Murder Mysteries conclude…
Nelson & Nox are hunting for the real killer behind the Moon Murder Mysteries, but they’re having to do that while preventing a god from getting what he wants.
With Nelson learning more than he ever thought possible about sex magick, Nox needs to make peace with his past and come to terms with who he is, but can he do that while curses abound and the killer is far too close to home?
Nox is a little bit witchcraft. Nelson is a little bit Federal Bureau. Together, they’re a wickedly good team, but can they solve the puzzle and catch a murderer before Nox’s fate catches up with them?
• Publisher: Bawdy Books (March 20, 2024)
• Publication date: March 20, 2024
• Language: English
• Print length: 290 pages








